An Adder in Pofadder

By Harry Broom

Published on Aug 21, 2024

Gay

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An Adder in Pofadder 3

Authors have the power to steer the direction of a story, and I was keen to explore three possible trajectories for this story. Even though this was a chance encounter, the chemistry between William and Marius was perfect.

The last part of the story takes place in an eco-camp outside the town of Pofadder, and ends with this paragraph:

"We pulled the duvet over us and spooned as we fell asleep in each other's arms."

I thought of ending the story with this paragraph, but I felt it would be incomplete. So, I leave it to you to choose one of these endings, or to write your own.

Ending 1

Marius and I were sleeping naked in the double bed. It was early morning, and I woke up when I heard the front open. I shook Marius to try to wake him up, and an elderly grey-haired man came into our room. I froze and didn't know what to say.

Marius responded: "Goeie more Pa wat maak jy hier?" (Good morning Dad what are you doing here?)

From the expression on his face, I immediately knew this was trouble. Dominee Visser began shouting at his son and pulled the duvet off us to find two naked men in bed. He went on about Sodom and Gomorra and sin. We jumped up and put our clothes on. He was red in the face and kept shouting in a preachy tone.

He gave us an hour to vacate the cottage and told Marius to clear his things out of the hotel and find another job.

It was all very embarrassing for Marius and I was in a state of mild shock, as I never imagined something like this happening. I sat on the bed and comforted Marius and assured this beautiful sensitive man that we would make a plan.

Ending 2

We forgot to turn the alarm on and overslept. Marius needed to return to the hotel urgently, and there was no time for a shower or breakfast and Marius simply slipped on a clean white shirt and trousers. I managed to quickly pack my things, and make sure that I had packed the clothes Marius had given me.

I drove as fast as I could on the dirt road churning up dust behind me. Marius held on tight, and I got him to work on time. He gave me a room key to shower and clean up and I had a slice of toast in the dining room before I hit the road to Upington Airport. Before I left Marius took me into his office where we kissed passionately. We committed to stay in touch and to see each other again. I had an erection, and my body reminded me of how I felt about Marius.

Ending 3

I woke up first, I slipped under the duvet and found Marius' erection and began to suck him. His genitalia had a musky smell from the night before and I liked it. I played with his balls, and I heard him moaning and telling me not to stop. His body started to jerk, and I kept my mouth on his dick as it pumped, and I savoured his cum before swallowing. He wanted to suck me but I said I had to first pee.

He followed me to the bathroom and joined me. Marius suggested that we clean up in the shower.

I checked my phone after a most satisfying shower and saw that I had a message from the airline. The morning flight had been cancelled because of a technical problem and I had been rescheduled on an afternoon flight. I wasn't disappointed because was delighted to spend more time with Marius. We enjoyed a wonderful breakfast on the veranda while Marius' colleague filled in for him at the hotel. We spent a half hour in the pool after breakfast (even though my mother said you shouldn't swim after a meal!)

Marius and I spoke about how we could be together in the future.


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