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My First Time (Part ii)
As we flicked the lights back on and kissed one last time in Kim's house, I dropped to my knees and sucked the head of his cock through his shorts. I licked my lips and told him not to leak too much, as I wanted a better taste. We headed back to the hot tub and I made some excuse and went upstairs to change, putting on my T-shirt and cut-off cords, figuring underwear would be unnecessary. I waited in my Explorer at the front of the neighborhood, fantasies of what we could do, of we've already done, and his hard cock flooding my head. I soon saw Jason pull beside me. He was still in his board shorts and had only but on a ribbed tank. "Where to?" He smiled. "How about the river park?" I said. "Under the stars, how prefect! I'm glad you have a big car!" He grinned. "SUVs are good for something!" My white teeth gleaming in the moonlight. I led and he followed me to make this first time even better...
The Park...
Josh followed me the 10 minutes to the Park, I was hard and nervous with anticipation the entire time. I pulled into the gravel lot and made a couple of turns to get us into a more wooded area of the parking lot. I rolled down the windows of the truck a little bit cause I didnt want it to get too steamy in there and got out of the car to start laying down the back seats.
Josh was sitting on the bumper when I got to the rear of the Explorer with his cute smirk teasing me, even when I was about to have him. I pulled him off the bumper and ran my hand across his nipples through his shirt as I lifted the tailgate. We both climbed in the back and lay on our sides facing each other, our fingers entangled between us. He made the first move again as he started to slide my shirt off, his hands shaking as he gently rubbed my nipples and stroked the hair under my arms as he pulled the shirt over my head. We locked in a kiss and started to touch each other everywhere. I literally tore his tank off of him as I craved more flesh. He pulled me on top of him and our hard, twink cocks ground against each other through our shorts as we tasted every part of each other's mouth, neck, and ears. His hands went into my shorts and grabbed my ass and pushed me harder into his cock while my hands moved across his strong shoulders and began to make their way down his pecs, lightly tugging on his erect, pink nipples. I sat up as his hands made their way around to the front of my corduroy cut-offs and began to unbutton my shorts and fly. I toggles at the string on the top of his bathing suit, loosening the top and hooked my fingers in and started to pull down. I went onto my knees in order to get his suit down and revealed his 6.5" cock that bounced in excitement whenever I looked down. Josh wrapped his hands around my 7" cock, now sticking out of my fly and commented on my size and the warmth of it in his hand. I laid down beside him and kicked my shorts off as he removed hs from his ankles and we just stared at each other grinning and holding the throbbing organ of our high school friend. I moved in for the kill and pulled him on top of me, our young cocks fighting for domination as we rolled back and forth in the rear of the explorer, our smooth chests rubbing against the others. I won of course and had him pinned beneath me, my knees at his hips, holding him in place and my hands on his shoulders. I first kissed his left nipple, playing with it in my mouth, nibbling and teasing, then left a light trail of saliva across his pecs as I reached the other nipple to do the same. Then I started moving down, Josh had to remove his fingers from my ass that he worked in as tongued his upper torso, I missed the feeling of him rubbing my prostate and sending chills into me, and I knew I had to have more. I slipped my tongue into his navel, and he wriggled with laughter. I then followed his happy trail to his beautiful blonde bush and began mouthing the base of his cock before I moved around to his balls. I licked one of each for good measure and started to kiss his inner thighs. He moaned, "Richie, please..." and that?s when I tasted my first big cock.
It was wonderful, sweet and salty at the same time. I began to bob up and down on his member, each time taking more. I felt his pubes hit my nose when he screamed he was getting close. I sat straight up, I had better plans for that cum. I sat on his legs, palming his sides and running my fingers over his cock. "How am I doing Joshua?" "Just great, but how come you're having all the fun? Bring that cock to me!" I laughed and began to lick my way up his body. Our tongues met for a few seconds and I kept moving up further. Josh licked my neck, chest, and nipples as they passed as my cock left a trail of pre-cum across his abs. He sighed when my cock reached him and then BAM, my whole cock was down his throat, if I wasn?t bracing myself on the armrest between the captain seats, i would have fallen onto his head. So much pleasure flew through my body as he worked his mouth on my hard, wet cock. His fingers began to explore again, one played with my abs as the other found my pink rosebud again and started working a finger in. It hurt a little bit, but I looked down into the cup holder and was never so happy to see the tube of moisturizer left in my car the day before. As I pumped my cock into Josh's mouth below me, I squirted some moisturizer onto his left hand as he was trying to work a second finger into me. When he got three fingers in, I was up on my knees and then bent over again as I had the most powerful orgasm of my life. Josh clamped down onto my cock when I screamed I was cumming as to not miss a drop of my seed. I shot a good 12 loads into his mouth before sliding back down his body. We were both out of breath when I began to stick my tongue into his mouth to taste my own cum, and it was great. He yelped though when my hand began to lube up his now painfully hard erection. He said he didn?t know how long he could last and that he'd never fucked anyone before. I said that I had never been fucked, but we were going to try it anyway. I straddled him and grabbed onto his shoulders as he aimed his hot organ into my waiting ass. It hurt a lot at first, but I was determined to get all of him in me, so I lowered myself until I had all 6.5" in me.
He said it was great and asked me how I was doing as began to rub my hard again cock. "Great apparently," I winked and began to move up and down on his cock. The sensation of being so filled and of him rubbing against my prostate was beyond incredible. We were both so loud we had to have a woodland creature audience outside wondering what the hell that noise was. We lasted about 2 minutes when I started to cum again. My cumming must have sent him off, because as soon as my ass tightened around his cock, he filled me to the brim with his cum, I nearly orgasmed again as I felt his cum hitting the walls in my ass. I collapsed on top of him exhausted. I was still straddling him, and his cock slipped out of my ass as it softened. I kissed him, deeply and rolled off to lie out in the back of my truck. The cool summer air floated across us and through the windows as we discussed what we had done and took a 30 min nap in the middle of the park at what was then 2am. I woke him up and grabbed some wet wipes to clean ourselves off, he insisted on cleaning my ass, which was him fingering me and wiping up some of his come that was still dripping out of my ass with his fingers, he pressed against my lips and I licked the cum off his fingers as he began to kiss me, sharing his cum. We then got dressed, got out of the truck, hugged each other and said thanx and pecked each other on the lips. And that was the last time we ever fooled around. We still talk on occasion, but he started dating some girl (I KNOW, CAN YOU BELIEVE IT!!!!???) and I started fooling around with more boys, I might tell you about some of those time later :-) Have a great one! -Richie geraldo80@yahoo.com